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Short Story "Safe In Here" Part 1 27 Aug 2013 | 04:33 am
read here: http://www.bubblews.com/news/805019-safe-in-here any feedback is appreciated :) The other tribes I joined don't seem very active so I'm hoping if this one is and you guys are cool with th...
She is transfigured now. (a short) 27 Jul 2011 | 08:50 am
"Not everyone was meant to be a solid, you know. I myself would have made a far better liquid. What tragedy that I am captive like this! My passions all jammed up in this stiffling state....I feel lik...
New here, and would like some crisitcism! 15 May 2011 | 07:40 pm
Hi! I joined this site after searching for someone to read my work and I stumbled on this message board. To keep it brief, I have started writing again. I majored in English language/literature in co...
silent's poetry corner 16 Sep 2010 | 11:46 pm
I usually write poems that are short and that do not convey any particular message. This is one of those poems, I am really curious what other people think because I only write poems for myself; like ...
Stories of the Flea 16 Jul 2009 | 02:02 pm
thought this page of enthusiasts might be interested in some modern fantasy realism and sci fi lite focusing on the character's psychological position in supernatural or otherworldy situations the...
Yet 12 Jun 2009 | 08:21 pm
by joyce james kak.me videospeak just a transition to _________. a blank page the gen preforms song (PIC THOUGHT) and dance wHAT IS COMMUNING WITHOUT THOUGHT? Emotion or something new. Nothing ...
What is wrong with this sentence? 19 May 2009 | 04:29 am
"But this story was set in that Gothic age before internet, when it was still possible to lose a person on this planet by accident." Something is wrong with it. I don't know what. posted in Creative...
Death Angel prose. What do you think 25 Apr 2009 | 05:28 am
A little something I wrote: Pe, pe peo ple said his brain was infected by devils In fected by, in fected by, in fected by devils People said his brain was infected by devils On top of a hill, part...
Small speech. With extended metaphor 13 Apr 2009 | 04:34 pm
I know people don't talk like this but it's a piece that I really liked. I wrote it to help relieve my writers block and can think of a perfect place to fit in a novel. Wondering what people think of ...
Memories of a Lost Love 12 Apr 2009 | 02:02 pm
When your heart is breaking, the world seems motionless. Time stops, and you wonder how life continues--how anything could move. Sadness drops its purple velvet curtain Amidst the sunny summer scene...
